My Needlepoint Approach To Plotting by Terry Odell
If someone asks how I got started writing, I’ll usually tell them it’s because I ran out of wall space for my needlepoint and needed a new creative outlet.
Of course, I really got started writing by mistake, when I thought I was being a with-it mom and started watching Highlander because my son had said it was a good show. After being sucked into the world of Immortals (come on, who can deny Adrian Paul isn’t worth watching, plot or no plot?), I discovered fan fiction, first as a reader, then as a writer. Imagine my surprise when one day, while talking to my son, I mentioned something that had happened on a recent episode.
I said, “What did you think about them killing off Tessa?”
“Duncan’s girlfriend. You know, in Highlander.”
“Oh, I never actually watched the show, I just thought it was a cool concept.”
Ah, if he only knew what he’d started.
But back to the needlepoint. I used to do both needlepoint and cross stitch, but I soon learned I preferred needlepoint because unlike counted cross stitch, with a needlepoint canvas, I could jump around when I got tired of one section. If I tried that doing a cross stitch, I always ended up off (and I have the pieces on the wall to prove it). But if I got sick of working on the pink tulip in needlepoint, I could switch to the blue iris and everything would blend together in the end.
Now, as a writer, I’m totally anal about writing in precise chronological order. Simple flashbacks make me jumpy, even when I know they’re the best way to cover the necessary ground. I can’t write something that happens in the middle of the book until I get there.
But plotting is something else. For me, that’s not writing. Plotting is brainstorming, although it’s often with myself. And for me, it’s thinking of the little bits and pieces – the flowers on the needlepoint canvas. The connecting bits – the background – comes later. True, the canvas may be painted with the final picture, but it’s not bright, and there’s no reason you have to stick precisely to the colors already there. I start with a fairly strong idea of who my characters are and what their conflict will be, but the story is vague. I know where it starts and where it will end. Maybe a few key points in between. But I write character driven stories.
As a matter of fact, when I get started, I don’t think of plots, I think of scenes and situations. Ideas for scenes come from everywhere. An overheard conversation, an article in the paper, something on television. In my head I’ll see characters cooking together, going to the park, eating in a fancy restaurant, driving, flying, or riding a bus across the country. Seeing a play, getting robbed, shooting someone. Falling into a river, being in a car accident. Losing someone they love.
In a romance, there are some scenes that a reader expects. First meet, first kiss, first sex. But where each of those things happens is up to the writer (or sometimes, the character).
You’ll notice I haven’t addressed characters. It’s impossible to separate what happens in a scene from the characters who inhabit it, but I’ve only got so much time and space for this blog. Suffice it to say, I spend a lot of time getting to know my characters before I toss them into a scene.
As the plot unfolds, ideas for scenes might change. Some get set aside for another book. Some get added because I can’t get from point A to point D without more things happening.
Sometimes it’s a melody that inspires a scene. I usually have my iTunes library set to ‘shuffle’ when I work, and I never know what might trigger something. “Take it to the Limit” just makes me want to be in someone’s arms, letting the music flow through us.
Did I know what I would be writing? How it would fit into a story? No, of course not. I just knew it would have to be in some story someday. As it turned out, it turned up as the first meet between hero and heroine in When Danger Calls, a “Pollyanna meets Delta Force” adventure due out in December of 2008 by Five Star Publishing. This is how it ended up:
Eyebrows raised, Jack assumed the dance stance, his hand at her back a feather touch, with a good six-inch gap between them. “Okay, lady. I’m here. Mind explaining why?”
He moved with the waltz rhythm.“I’m avoiding one of the customers.
My feet can’t take another attack of his waltzing. He can handle two-two and four-four all right, but the man can’t seem to count to three.”
“And you assumed I could?” One corner of his mouth turned up.
Almost a smile. Another minute and she’d have Belle’s five. “I figured I’d chance it. I’m very good at reading people, you know.”
He drew her closer and she smelled soap and an underlying outdoors scent above the room’s beer background. No cloying aftershave. Jack’s graceful movements belied the way he’d stumbled into the bar as he led her around the floor. His hand at her back was warm through her thin blouse. The bet forgotten, she caught herself before she rested her cheek on his chest.
“What?” he said.
“I didn’t say anything.”
“You didn’t have to. You’re surprised I can dance. I’m not so bad at reading people myself.”
Her face grew warm, and she gave thanks for the dim lighting. He couldn’t have read all her thoughts, could he? How, despite her aching feet, she wanted the dance to go on longer? How she wanted to make the pain in his eyes go away?“
It’s not that—really. I mean, most of the guys can handle a two-step, but they don’t seem to do anything different when it’s a waltz. Thank goodness the band doesn’t play many. But you know what you’re doing, and it’s nice not to have to dodge feet and knees.”
His eyes crinkled at the edges. “I’ll take that as a compliment.” As if teaching her not to jump to conclusions, he led her in a series of perfectly executed pivot turns.
When he settled into a basic waltz step, the gap between them was now a lot less than six inches. A long-forgotten tingling surprised her. She licked her lips and swallowed. “So, where did you learn to dance?”
“Part of my job,” he said, and his face clouded. The music stopped. He dropped her hand and disappeared from the dance floor.
“Thanks,” she whispered after him. She adjusted her skirt and went back to the bar, her heart beating faster than a waltz warranted.
Sometimes the scenes don’t play out the way I thought they would. I’d had a scene in my head for years – Randy & Sarah from Finding Sarah would be in the mountains in an old summer camp. There would be a bunch of kids there, and it would be a very scary storm, and Sarah would lead the kids in singing while Randy played the piano. (Probably inspired by the Peter, Paul & Mary Around the Campfire CD my daughter gave me.) Anyway, the summer camp in the rain scene morphed into a dance recital at a nursing home. The dance instructor forgot the CDs and Randy ended up playing piano so they could put on the show for the seniors.
And one of my short stories, Words, was supposed to be a light-hearted fluff piece, inspired by my husband’s comments at a Chinese restaurant, but it became a very sensuous piece, almost literary.
And sometimes a character triggers a scene. Blake, in What’s In A Name? clicked for me when I heard the line, “Papa, I don’t think I said ‘I love you’ near enough,” in Leader of the Band by Dan Fogelberg. I knew there would be a scene where he had to admit that to himself.
I tend to write from scene to scene. Sometimes the one in my head is several chapters away from where I’m writing, but I know I have to get there. I truly admire writers who can plot out an entire book. I tried it –bought the white board and the sticky notes. But, the only way I could do it was after I wrote the chapters.
The closest I came to plotting was for Hurricane Breeze, a new short story from The Wild Rose Press, which is in production. Since it was a short story, I could hold most of the storyline in my head. My crit group and I brainstormed ideas and how to get to “the end.” We did it so well, I knew exactly what I had to write. From that point on, it became an actual chore to get the words down. For me, the fun is exploring, and if my roadmap is too detailed, it’s just a strenuous hike, not an adventure.
So, as I write, I tend to know where I need to be a chapter or two away, and it becomes a matter of filling in all the in-between stuff. As I move closer to the scene that’s been playing out in my head, I might get a glimpse of where that will lead, and I’ll have a new flower to add to my canvas.
Yes, I apply what I’ve learned about the craft as I write. No scene should exist without covering at least 3 plot points. It needs several good reasons to be there. There should be conflict, of course, and something the readers don’t expect so they’ll turn the page.
Are there false starts, or scenes that don’t work? Yes. But I’ve ripped out my share of needlepoint stitches when I’ve made mistakes, too. I regard the time I spend rewriting as the equivalent of the detailed plotting other writers do. I figure the act of writing itself is a learning process and helps me hone the craft. As I wrote my 6th book, I noticed fewer instances where I had to rip out work I’d already done.
I hope you’ll take some time to wander through my website, www.terryodell.com. I’ve got a section called “Behind the Scenes” where you can read about the stories behind the stories. And be sure to follow the link to my personal blog – I spent a month in South Africa and have been posting journal excerpts and pictures.
Thanks for reading. I hope you’ll check out some of my books and short stories. I love to hear from readers, and there are links to my email on both my blog and website.
Интересно, откедова это чудо вылезло?
Жесть! Все очень толково и грамотно, и в то же время без умствований и самолюбования, и на доступном языке. Редкий случай когда человек делится ценной и интересной инфой. Спасибо автору!
Да, такой блог по-любому надо раскручивать сильнее – что б как можно больше жителей интернета о нем узнали! 🙂
Можно и поспорить по этому вопросу, ведь только в споре может родиться истина. 🙂
Естественно присоединяюсь к вышесказанному!
Never too late, LK — glad you stopped by, and glad you’re enjoying the blogs
I’m here late, but had to say I’m also a fan of the Highlander TV series, and I write the same way, building characters first in certain scenes and then building the rest around that. I need to get back to your blog and finish reading about your South Africa trip!
Thanks for coming to my writing.com blog where I posted your link. One of my friends who posts there is from Zim.
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If you’ll visit my website, http://www.terryodell.com and email me your email address, I’ll send you the file. The link to my email is under my picture. I’ll send you a PDF file unless you want something else.
Hi, Allison – your ‘non-plotting’ method inspires me. Besides, the first writing is what anyone else would call plotting, right? I think finding out what happens on the fly is a lot of the fun, and makes the writing stronger.
Kim – I agree, it’s good to know that what works for each of is is “right” and not that we have to fight our instincts and what works.
Great post Terry! I love to see how everyone tackles writing. Everyone is so different.
Hi Terry! Just thought I’d stop by and say hi 🙂 . . . as you know, I’m not a plotter, and I tend to write every book twice. Sigh. But we do what works, right?
Thanks, Ana — yeah, I am always finding out stuff about my characters. Graham was supposed to be reading a motorcycle magazine, but he set it aside and picked up Gourmet instead. Whoda thunk it? He turned out to be a gourmet cook. Guess it had to be, because Colleen couldn’t cook, and I can’t go a whole book without writing food scenes.
He’s going to be a guest at RT this year, but it’s way out of my price range, not to mention there’s an additional charge for his special appearance one night. Ah well — no point in blowing my fantasy by seeing a roomful of women who all have the hots for him.
Great analogy! Sounds like your process is similar to mine. Sometimes my characters didn’t do what I expected them to and I have to go back and change motivations, etc. to make it believable.
I can’t wait to read your book!
Sidelined by Love from The Wild Rose Press
Hey Terry! I’ve definitely never tried needlepoint, but I used to have a serious thing for Adrian Paul. Yum! Can’t wait to read your next book!
Are they still writing those? I remember how excited everyone was when the first one was due out — a chance to ‘see’ old friends. But they weren’t very good, at least not to the die-hards. The books didn’t follow the ‘rules’ of the series. Most of us fan fiction writers thought we could have done better. But anything that gets you reading is good. I’m always reading something. And I’m glad one of the things you’re reading is this blog!
its funny the highlanders started your writting.and restarted me into reading again. i try to read any highlander book i can find.
Jenyfer- my storyTELLING is linear to the point of being anal sometimes, but the PLOTTING bounces around like crazy. I’ve given up trying to do it any other way.
Donna & Diane: I think there’s a lot to be said for fan fiction as a way to learn the craft. Characters are already there, and so is their universe. It lets you focus on learning in bits and pieces until you’re comfortable going out into the wild beyond where you have to create everything from scratch. What’s in a Name? has roots in one of my Highlander short stories, and if you look carefully, you’ll see a lot of Duncan in Blake.
I enjoyed reading how you approach writing your stories. Mine are character driven, too. I haven’t watched Highlander but glad it stimulated your creative juices and got you started on writing. Great post!
What a great blog! You already know I’m a huge Highlander fan and couldn’t agree with you more an all your points about that show. It satisfied my need for originality and the unique and I strive to keep that in my own writing. I can certainly see that the fanfiction gave you a wonderful start!!
Congratulations on your many accomplishments and I am so looking forward to When Danger Calls! That is my kind of book!
Looks like another keeper from Terry Odell.:)
Interesting analogy. I also dabble in needlepoint from time to time – only I tend to be as linear there as I am in my storytelling!
Hi, Jess —
And I didn’t mention that I’ll give away a free download to one lucky commenter, so pass the word!
You need a comment. So, it’s really cool that I get to say,”My mom’s a published author!”